Last month, I posted (here and here) about a GWPF call for submissions on temperature adjustments. I included a hasty draft, which people were kind enough to comment on. I hope I've incorporated most of those suggestions in this update. I have edited for sobriety and brevity, and shortened the blogpost inclusions. I have added a list of references. I have left the in-line links, because I doubt that many readers will have a paper-only copy; there is a list of urls at the end.
I'm planning to submit it within the next few days, unless readers think further improvement is required.
Update - I have sent it with the correction noted in comments.